Friday, 25 November 2016

The Bush

On a cold morning a family went hunting for some animals on their way they found a bush it was pretty huge it was kinda near a forest there were so many huge bush but there was one different looking bush it looked pretty weird it had 3 flax only and it was rotten. It smelt like rotten fish from the sea a whole bunch of people went walking past the stinky old looking bush they said it smells like stinky shoes.I couldn't believe that one person said it smelt nice when the lady said that it smelt nice i was going cut the bush off it’s not my property so i’m not going to do that i left that i still wanted to cut off but in my head i was thinking i will be in big trouble so i didn’t do i could not take it so i decided to break the rules i cutted the bush off and what the manager said i had to pay 1,000 dollar to remake a new bush i said’’ no do not remake a new stinky bush the judge said’’. Did you just say stinky bush” that’s is it the judge said i’m not making a new stinky bush !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I yelled so then i planted a new nice smelling bush instead. But i said what do you mean it’s not a stinky bush well smell it said the judge no way i’m not smelling that stinky i will dunked head into the bush if you don’t smell it fine okay 5’4’3’2’1 go OMG that smells delicious.

Thursday, 10 November 2016

camping trip

Walt: writing about a boy went out camping with his family.

Once upon a time there was a boy called James. He went camping out in the deep forest with his parents. While James was picking up sticks for the camp fire he met a family that had forgotten there camping gear. James ran to his parents and said "I saw a new family that have forgotten their stuff’.
“Maybe we can share with them?” James asked. Mom said ‘that’s a great Idea.We can take some food for them And we can have a kai together?” okay said james. Well mum was really hungry so she called them to come and eat.
After the Kai Mom and James and the others put up their tent. It was super windy so the tent came down. When it stop rainy the family put up the tent again.Once they finished putting up the tent  james and his mum enjoyed the rest of their camping trip.

thida why we have soap

Wednesday, 31 August 2016

hiwi the kiwi story

Once upon a time in the past few years I went fishing with my popa
We saw Seabirds up in the cloudy sky they were really hungry they had not eaten for two whole weeks.

There were plastic bottle caps  and rubbish bags shining while floating in the sea. The Seabirds thought they were fish so dove down to eat it. But one  died because the seabird that  ate it  did not know that the bottle cap will stuck in his throat. The bottle cap was huge I went down my life jacket to see what’s wrong.

The seabird could not breathe at all it was quite sad all the family members were upset. It was R.I.P  time all family members friends came along have some time saying goodbye and you're always in my heart.

Monday, 29 August 2016

holiday writing

On Monday I got drop off at the airport there were millions of people going to a place called Australia it was a hot and sunny.

I’ve never been in Ozzy/ Well have you ? in australia i saw a lot of creatures I saw Tiny Snakes/ Alligator / Possum / Bat / Cockroach / Porcupine / and Kangaroo they were scary because some of those creatures that I saw bites sometimes.

On the 2nd week i went to the museum i saw some thrones dinosaur bones and many things I stayed there for about 2 hours the museum was huge there were heaps and heaps of things. My granmar thought those dinosaur fossil were fake.

By thida

Thursday, 7 July 2016

tell the time

money seller

my real life hero

Start your writing here:

A real life hero is a person who protects and defend others.
They also help people when they need help or they're in danger. Firefighters nurses doctors ambulance and police officer are all examples of everyday hero.

My dad is my hero because he works hard to provide our family. He also helps us washing our car because sometimes our car is muddy. My dad inspires me to do better at school.

I love my dad.

Tuesday, 31 May 2016

describe spider man

Spider Man real name is Peter Parker. He was bitten by a highly enhanced spiders. Peter Parker has superpowers including strength agility and spider senses and that can scale buildings. 

Spider Man wears a red and blue costume and a mask to keep his secret identity a secret. Spider Man is a protector of mankind
he loves to save other people.

Describing Spider Man

Spider Man real name is Peter Parker. He was bitten by a highly enhanced spiders. Peter Parker has superpowers including strength agility and spider senses and that can scale buildings. Spider Man wears a red and blue costume and a mask to keep his secret identity a secret

Thursday, 26 May 2016

Problem Solving

Walt: find a fraction of a number


the moon dance across  the ocean as if on the lighted stage the tireed shoe was hiding at the back of the closet

personification dictogloss

the moon dance upon the ocean as if on a spotlighted stage the tired old shoe felt lo shine at the back of the closet the cellphone alarm screamed at me as soon i rolled out bed

Wednesday, 25 May 2016


questions for regan gentury did he become a artist? He learnt by his own self many days did it to make the wire plants? 16 weeks to make it
3.why did regan build a bread seagull? He wanted see how the seagulls react many light bulbs did he put uder the water? He puted 350 light bulbs under the water.

5.what did he make the house in? He made the house a rubbish bin

Wednesday, 18 May 2016

stories teller

thida corn beef tins

  1. What did you make the turtles with? I made them with corn beef tins
  2. Question:  what does faga’ofe means? Answer: faga’ofe means (home-made fireworks)
  3. Question:  how did michael love art more than rugby Answer: Michael loved art because he wasn’t good at reading or writing.
  4. Question: what did you make the bull out of? I made the bulls out of corn beef tins?

Wednesday, 11 May 2016

win war.


this term our topic is about as i see it . it is pictures in little boxes there is some dialog in boxes


This term our topic is called as i see it our team is focusing on comic arts  comics are pictures in small boxes that tell us stories are in sequential orders.sometimes there is

Tuesday, 3 May 2016

My holiday highlight writing.

Hi my name is Thida and i will tell you about my holidays. On Saturday i went to my mums friends house and we did some crafting. Her name was Allie. After doing some crafting  she took me to a beautiful beach named St Heliers It was a really fun beach. At the beach there was a big rock that I climbed on and it was huge!!!! and It was really slippery . Me and my friend went on the on the slippery rock.

My friends name was Aye Aye Ellen and Shwe they are really nice friends. We had ice cream. My friend Aye Aye had a sour lime ice cream Ellen had a vanilla ice cream shwe had an Olaf ice cream and Allie my mums friend had a coconut chocolate ice cream and me myself had the same one as Allie the coconut chocolate one, it was so Delicious!!!!.

After playing at the beach for 4 hours my friends had to go home but I went to my mums friend Allie’s house again and we did more and more crafting we made hearts a card some necklaces bracelets and some painting. That was the funnest  day ever Allie also said on the following week she is taking me to RAINBOW END!!!!!

After crafting at Allie’s house Allie took me home.

Thanks for reading my holiday story hope you enjoy.

Thursday, 14 April 2016

Fiafia story

On Thursday night we had a fiafia Performance at Pt England school.
I got to school by 6:00pm.

When we finished dancing we had a treat we had crunchy a milky bar fruit burst and some coffee lollies.

At fiafa I was in the Asian group. My favourite part was the Tongan girls because they had a pretty dance also they used a Tongan song for their dance.

About Fifita from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Volcano movie

Thida Volcano. from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Fiafia 2016

FiaFia 2016 Night snippets from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Advice work

Friday, 1 April 2016



Special ride 2

1. What was the problem in the story?
They did not know how to get down to the picnic spot.

2. Explain what a flying fox is (in 2 sentences)
A fire fox is like a swing you can sit on it and you hold on the rope so you do not fall
and there is a rope on the bottom so someone can pull you back up.

Blog Title: The Special Ride II
Copy and past the WALT

Use your answers from the questions above to write three sentences for your blog. Explain what is happening in the bike track that you draw. (Upload both to your blog).

special rade

Thursday, 31 March 2016

Thida'S Sir Edmund Hillary Fact File


My Easter story

On Easter Monday my mum took my 2 brothers.At the Easter show there were so much people.My mum and my 2 brother were at the Easter show but i had to go home with my aunt because she said so. I was so jealous because i had to stay at home with my
aunt Rosanna. Staying with my aunt Rosanna was kind a fun because we did some baking.After baking we went to pick up my mum and my 2 brothers.When we picked up my mum my brother went to his friends name Josh and Rico's house/THE END.

Tuesday, 22 March 2016

Pirate treasure

Once upon a time there lived a pirate named Captain Hook. Captain Hook was a friendly pirate he traveled to the Seven Seas. Captain Hook wore a clean sweat shirt and he wore a shiny looking pants he had an eye patch on his eyes.
Captain Hook has six crews there names were Louise James Mathew Conn Ah Jacob Josh and Justin.They were nice and polite crews his crew helped him on everything he needed to do. Captain Hook has two Daughter And three sons the girl's name was Brittany and Katelyn The three Sons name was Noah William .The family was a kind family they helped others on building a house. Captain Hook's wife passed away his wife was seventy two years old, and his two daughters was twenty four and the other is twenty six years old. The wife and the two daughters passed away from sickness.

Friday, 18 March 2016

All about me.

The 3 little pigs.

Captain Morgan

Captain Morgan Adams was a Tyrant. around the seven seas. But also
He had enemies like British . He went Around the seven seas Along with his crew he went with his crew. He had a boat it had taken it around the world. He had nasty friends.

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Dragon/About Zack the dragon

once upon time there was a dragon named zack he was playing in the forest with his brother. When another dragon came along what are you two doing he asked ? we’re playing knights they replied do you want to play to said zack.

Just wait Hmm” I think he is is a bad dragon I should not play with him i will go tell him. Hey I am not playing with you because you are bad. I will prove it Watch this video Okay. Oh you are friendly yes i am Fine I will play with you. Let’s go and play i want you to choose a game to play.

because you are bad. I will prove it Watch this video Okay. Oh you are friendly yes i am Fine I will play with you. Let’s go and play i want you to choose a game to play.

Sir Edmund hillary

Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Non stop cricket


On slippery watery thursday morning room 11/12 went out for a game called non stop cricket.


We all got in groups of 4.My team mate was batting the ball feriously far.Rm12 had to catch the ball it was amazing and rm11 had to bat the ball they batted the ball really far. soon some people stop because they were gasping for breath.

But a boy was sneaky we were supposed to run to each cone but he opened his his leg and then got the bat then tap to each cone.And then we went to class and then Mr Moran told us some juicy vocab so we can put it into our writing.

Mt Taranaki

Thursday, 25 February 2016

max and his family Going out for a picnic:

Max could see from a distance a family that was at each other's throat.The father was yelling how could you forget the food. To which the mother replied and it was honest mistake I’m sure someone will help us.

Cat at the Sunny Beach

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.
Byron was sad because he just found out that his grandma had  passed away. He was so sad he did not know how she died” “Johnson” said  “she is old she might have been very sick. Johnson was trying to cheer up Byron he could not stop thinking about how much fun he had with his grandma. His grandma bought every single thing that Byron wanted. Byron looked after his grandma when she was sick.On the second day Byron didn't cry he remembered that he kept a photo of his grandma. He was happy he played with Johnson He asked Byron Are you still sad said Johnson? No I am not sad anymore said Byron.